Terrific “predicate-to-subject” cohesion by MC

All characters in stories have a purpose. That purpose is to serve the common good.

A very strong “cohesive tie.” Wonderful!

I love this introduction. It ‘grabs me by the lapels’  and makes me want to hear what MC is going to say next.

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